Cycle Of Life Poem by Amanda Miller

Cycle Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Naked lies,
blinded eyes,
feign highs,
time dies.

Slow tide,
mouth wide,
lost side,
truth hide.

Current state,
no date,
love to hate,
couldn't wait.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

'How beatiful youth is, that flies nevertheless' Lorenzo the Magnificent wrote. More or less you wrote the same thing.

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p.a. noushad 30 May 2008

dear amanda, the realities of earthly life and its flow into unknown is beautifully depicted in this poem.my vote i give you.

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Michael Koelliker 27 May 2008

the bluntness and frankness of it portrays the meaning i feel at the moment. very gorgeous.

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~ Jon London ~ 27 May 2008

Hi Amanda, this delicately penned piece, has a really strong tone...yet some how there's a sweet softness contained...nice job. keep this gift going Amanda best wishes Jon

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