Crowded Beaches Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Crowded Beaches

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crowded beaches with their stretched out
sands, theres a wrechge that use to be a
ship, now it looks like a rib cage, from that
women and man..
crowded beaches with their eddies and
waves, there are stars way above, and a
moon that turns on its flashlight, , for the
lovers in the sand.

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Goldy Locks 08 April 2007

hmm...mm. rolling, magnetic.

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