Credit Poem by Melanie Emikohe

Credit

Rating: 5.0


A credit tastes sweet but once
when it's compact and fresh~
crispy bills out of nowhere
that salvages temporarily!

Then becomes a black ghost,
day after day.
evasive, scared in finding
yet the goosebumps show!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Garcia 17 February 2007

Melamie; In America this is the most great sin, once addicted to credit, it will sqeeze your life away, as bad as any drugs at bay. Like your thoughts reading your work. Charles Garcia

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Roger Bowman 16 February 2007

I like this one... Take care Melanie Roger

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Marvin Brato 14 February 2007

You said it right Melanie, tama lang ang pahayag mo sa poem na ito, MAGALING Ka! .

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