###create Me Anew! Poem by Dee Wright

###create Me Anew!

Rating: 5.0


I want you to touch me...create me anew.

Make me as if I never were me...create me anew.

Make me as Eve waking in the Garden
as if this is the only now that ever existed
...create me anew.

Your fingertips tracing the arc of my desire
...create me anew.

My breasts formed out of darkness & your hungry mouth
...create me anew.

A hip...a thigh...fashioned out of nothing but pure joy
...create me anew.

Let me lose my self in you until there is no longer a me & you
...create me anew.



Oh Dee Dee...! Let me break free from the name that is me!



...create me…create me...create me...



...anew!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 27 April 2008

Wonderful, expressive; i like your style! ... and the idea of creation anew through love is great classic

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Flora Gillingham 22 April 2008

A new voice for a new you! The new you's as beautiful as the old you but wearing brighter colours. How happy we are how happy you are! ! Fx

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Original Unknown Girl 22 April 2008

This is glorious..... and it's exactly how one feels when in the heights of love. I adore this for all that it says and am so very happy for you that he makes you feel this way. (Just one thing though, he doesn't need you to be created anew, he fell in love with the you that is the 'current' you - just a thought!) Great scribing though. HG: -) xx

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