Confused Poem by Evelyn Knight

Confused

Rating: 5.0


I don't know if I want to slam my fist in to the wall or slide down it crying.

I don't know whether to run or hide from the darkness
Or just lay there and let it consume me.

I don't know if i want to scream,
Or be so silent no one will notice me.

I don't know anything,
I don't know what to do anymore
I don't know how to feel anymore
I don't know what to be anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 24 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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