Confused Poem by Ashley Howell

Confused



All I see is darkness
when im trying to get to the light
I have nothing else to do
other than sit right here and fight
I can hardly fight though
You see my arms and legs are tied down
They have tied me down so very tight
that I can barely move around
My sweat is falling like bullets
and I really cant seem to see
Why everything is against me
and why everyone hates me
I havent done anything wrong
Or treated any soul bad
But I really do have to admit
This is the most fun I have ever had
I am always inside
doing chores, nothing new
its good to have something
exciting to do
Im still tied down though
and I still cant make it out
the only thing I can do except for fight
is to SHOUT! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cool Sunny 14 October 2007

Confused The struggle may be long the stakes may be high the light may seem too far love may be deaf to you Everyone may seem to hate you Perplexity may seem your friend the world may seem not fair Justice may be deaf to you Never give in to condemnation Never give up on justice Never let hope escape from your bosom Joy will come running down to you Take care! The world needs you, care about you, and I am praying for you. You are making a difference even without realizing it! ! ! ! Keep it up! ! ! Never give up.

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Ashley Howell 27 March 2007

wow, this is a really beautiful poem, right from a childish point of view, keep it up

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