Confused Poem by Life Poem
Confused
Hungry for something you can't have
ignoring the tell-tale cries of the wind.
Heart beating at maddening pace
searching for already there answers.
No one can feel what you are
inside of that paralyzed smile.
Each step leads you deeper in
to see the cracks cannot be filled.
Brilliant how you describe a confused person, amazing work.
No one can feel what you are inside of that paralyzed smile. Nice expressions here my dear friend...... you give a great message.. always good to get something out of the poem..after reading it.. with lv shan
Thanks Mona. I wanted to try something different. I'm not sure I nailed it, but your comment is appreciated
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4/23/2024 7:45:13 AM # 1.0.0.1119
cool. very nice and creative.