Conflict Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Conflict

Rating: 4.9


Only my heart knows
The trauma of
A ruptured faith

The soul in conflict
Separating me
From my inner self

© Aarzoo Mehek

Conflict
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A very powerful rendering. Emotional. Top score and onto Myfav

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 January 2023

A very heartfelt and touching poem. So well expressed.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 January 2023

this poem has brilliantly touch my mind

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 25 January 2023

Conflict of conscience cannot give the peaceful room to the life! ~

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 25 January 2023

Brilliant honest expression. Every word counts there. Nice

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Josehf Murchison 01 December 2023

Very nice I like the graphics.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 January 2023

What a beautiful poem. Loved this wonderful poem and the precise comment of my poet friend Rob Lamberton. Top score.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2023

The conflict we all go through. Once again you speak for everyone, my friend! Bravo!

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M. Asim Nehal 25 January 2023

Free flow of emotions in your poem will surely reach its destination. Lovely poem - setting apart the emotions from self.

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Rob Lamberton 25 January 2023

Conflict within can blind us to our own self. Often it's linked to our faith in others. This sort of conflict is traumatic!

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