Completed Poem by Francesca Lam

Completed

Rating: 5.0


When you are here around
I found my way out of this maze
Things became so amazing
All I saw are the beauty of life
I was surrounding by this bliss
How I hope it would never be gone

Now, we are far apart
I feel like getting lost in this mess
My brain is blanked out
I could see nothing but our blurred future
I am buried by this sense of lost
My heart is found to be completed
Only if you are around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

A beautiful composition. The last line are nice.10++ 'My heart is found to be completed Only if you are around'

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R H 15 June 2006

The sense of love, loss and longing resounds. Lovely poem Francesca, Kind regards, Justine

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