Compared To What, Castration? Poem by Ted Sheridan

Compared To What, Castration?

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Tantamount
To the wind playing war games with my hair
or the hard rain scrubbing my face raw of flesh;
to that of the sun leaving me hot under the collar
or the ground shaking beneath my fallen arches
I find just the thought of her loving me
every bit as provoking….

2008 ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 02 May 2008

I love the originality of your work Ted. Your poetry sizzles. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Coach Roth 02 May 2008

Interesting title and more...love the imagery...brings to mind so many different angles of who she is and why you feel this way...Coach

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