**cold Relationships Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

**cold Relationships

Rating: 3.4


Like a climber
On the trunk
With no flowers
No green leaves
No fruits shall it bear
Tears that fall to dry
Cold relationships
Have in common
Nothing in emotion
Nothing from heart
Watch the steps
In cold snow
Love is dragged
Like a cart
Too heavy
9/7/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ro'ya Abdulaal 09 July 2009

that was awesome, soooooo true, I loved the comparison, well done

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rago rago 09 July 2009

love in pain never be dragged....... and the cold relationships always awesome to carryon...........

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 July 2009

yea said the truth beautifully! 'Love is dragged Like a cart Too heavy' 10++++++

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Lady Grace 16 July 2009

some perennial trees bear no fruits..it could be compared to cold relationship..cold relationship is also like nothing..or useless..the presentation is very smart..nice to read....grace

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Ency Bearis 14 July 2009

you wrote it to its true...well said and penned...10

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Reshma Ramesh 12 July 2009

how true......well said

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Kesav Easwaran 09 July 2009

heavy theme...said so light... with utmost ease...and of course bright...thanks Sadiq...10

1 1 Reply
Ejaz Khan 09 July 2009

Beautifully narrated! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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