Coexistence Poem by Amitava Sur

Coexistence

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In what a pleasant state YOU kept us nowadays
I have no words with me to explain in a better way!
Someone gets up leisurely late at noon
Whether someone cannot sleep at all
Being starved throughout! !

Ha Ha,
In what a pleasant state YOU kept us nowadays
I have no words with me to explain in a better way!
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Amitava (30.8.2015)

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Coexistence
Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dilemma
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 10 September 2015

Truly, the condition seems unconditional to conditions

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Savita Tyagi 08 September 2015

Enjoyed your choice of words Amitav. Looking at world we can simply be amused or be full of gloom. None of the situation is going to disappear. Better keep your own peace of mind.

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2015

Thank you Savita for liking my poem

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Roseann Shawiak 08 September 2015

Amitava, I feel you have explained it very succinctly and to the point exactly! Very well written message about the state we are in today! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2015

Thanks a lot for your appreciation

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Kelly Kurt 08 September 2015

A deep and nicely written piece, Amitava

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2015

Thank you for your comment

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Gajanan Mishra 08 September 2015

no words with me, thanks.

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2015

Thanks for your comment

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