Clearing The Air Poem by Dee Daffodil

Clearing The Air

Rating: 5.0


Whew!
After what seems like an eternity
Of avoiding our issues...
We've finally had that 'talk' today
And now the air seems clearer

Facts were stated...
Straight and true
With very little feeling
The honesty between us...
Was certainly revealing

I can breathe a little easier now...
The air is looking clearer
The fog has lifted...
Winds have changed
And peace of mind is nearer

Dee Daffodil (HW) 11 April,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Threadgold 11 October 2008

Hi Dee. its always good to clear the air I feel and you've done it very well with this one. Regards Dave T 10/10

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Barry Van Allen 19 April 2008

Dee, Short and to the point, great writing is like that, make no mistake this one is great, ... now what? B.V.A.

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Nothing like thrashing it out... even if it doesn't bring the answers one might hope. Analogy well carried through dee. t x

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Ted Sheridan 11 April 2008

It sure beats one of those plug in air fresheners doesn't it?

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