Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 3 Points (Singapore)

**** Christmas without You


C - Christmas carols oh blazon,
unearth the eve of torn images that churn

H - Hitch hiking each moment,
that eclipses in every turns

R - Raging the innocent faces,
as winter white blanketing the sadness

I - Illusive and passive,
Jesus shying away in recognition of crisis

S - Solemn night airs the song of broken love,
like broken wings of Dove

T - Tormented in many pieces,
Santa’s gifts shattered in many places

M - Mellow as Christmas Choir singing ‘goodbye Jesus ‘,
impregnate further the thirst

A - Akin to a long gone night of thousand lights,
that merrier and so bright

S - Santa says “get her now or there wouldn’t be,
another cherish Christmas, at first, thee'

Honey, there’ll be no Christmas
Without you, quenching my thirst

There’ll be no Bell ringing
Without you, topping my longing

Merry Christmas to you
Without you, I feel blue

Submitted: Friday, December 19, 2008
Edited: Monday, February 02, 2009

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  • Rookie Adriana Veloso (1/11/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    we always want to be with who we love on christmas day! ! !
    but most of the time we can't (like me)
    But all we want for christemas is the one! ! !
    and we don´t care about the presents underneath the Christmas tree
    we just want him/her for our own

    and this is too sad

    adriana veloso (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dolan Doran (1/2/2009 7:24:00 PM)

    interesting..never thought of Christmas that way....it's creative...lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Moushumi moushumi (12/31/2008 8:23:00 AM)

    It should reach to one of 500 poems. This style is innovative.
    Happy New year. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sierra Love (12/29/2008 4:54:00 PM)

    Wow this poem was really beautiful....you have such a creative way of looking at Christmas....never though of it that way. Great job, I really love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mimi Fakhira (12/29/2008 4:28:00 AM)

    Creative poem... a successful write. I totally love it! Have a great New Year! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Egi David Perdana (12/27/2008 10:40:00 PM)

    happy christmas my pal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Little Hatila ;) (12/26/2008 10:42:00 PM)

    'Merry Christmas to you
    Without you, I feel blue'
    very sad, but hope she will be there soon....10

    Hataw (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 317 Points Subbaraman N V (12/24/2008 12:16:00 AM)

    I am there! Merry Christmas to you and the New Year too! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Kamran Haider (12/23/2008 10:51:00 AM)

    Bro, you are really master of words... Merry Christmas to you...
    God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Costa Anakiev (12/23/2008 6:51:00 AM)

    well done! it's nearly an acrostic. read my new 'Writing to Santa again'. merry x-mas to you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Daniel Aguero (12/23/2008 6:27:00 AM)

    nice poem.. anyways merry christmas to u.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Beautifully Unknown (12/21/2008 8:31:00 PM)

    very nice poem! i love it
    very strong message! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amy (12/21/2008 4:25:00 PM)

    this poem shows a very strong message

    very oxymoron

    nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jean Avendaño (12/21/2008 8:04:00 AM)

    Nice poem.. I can relate to it. How I wish to be with my special someone on that special day. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Milad Ghezello (12/21/2008 4:06:00 AM)

    This poem is very nice. I enjoy reading this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points Maxim Muyu (12/21/2008 3:27:00 AM)

    It's so lovely and the style is so unique and very artful.Great Writings. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (12/21/2008 3:24:00 AM)

    Dear Poet Well Written Treat for Holy `X`Mas I found a delicious Cake and a Cute Cup of Wine in Your Hands for your Beloved Honey, It was a very Good Treat for the Holy Season, Thanks for sharing the Great Art, Thank You. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Little Morning Star (12/21/2008 2:28:00 AM)

    Christmas is the time we gather with our beloved..
    beautiful acrostic poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kite Remedy (12/21/2008 1:59:00 AM)

    This definitely a magnificent work..
    So silent I can capture the sadness beyond the words..
    Beautiful, truly.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (12/21/2008 12:02:00 AM)

    a marvellous write bro and yes their's no happiness in any occasion if the one we love is not with us to share....thanks for sharing 10+++
    rgds
    asif (Report) Reply

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