(Singapore)

poet Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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**** Christmas without You

C - Christmas carols oh blazon,
unearth the eve of torn images that churn

H - Hitch hiking each moment,
that eclipses in every turns

R - Raging the innocent faces,
as winter white blanketing the sadness

I - Illusive and passive,
Jesus shying away in recognition of crisis

S - Solemn night airs the song of broken love,
like broken wings of Dove

T - Tormented in many pieces,
Santa’s gifts shattered in many places

M - Mellow as Christmas Choir singing ‘goodbye Jesus ‘,
impregnate further the thirst

A - Akin to a long gone night of thousand lights,
that merrier and so bright

S - Santa says “get her now or there wouldn’t be,
another cherish Christmas, at first, thee'

Honey, there’ll be no Christmas
Without you, quenching my thirst

There’ll be no Bell ringing
Without you, topping my longing

Merry Christmas to you
Without you, I feel blue

Submitted: Friday, December 19, 2008
Edited: Monday, February 02, 2009

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  • Adriana Veloso (1/11/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    we always want to be with who we love on christmas day! ! !
    but most of the time we can't (like me)
    But all we want for christemas is the one! ! !
    and we don´t care about the presents underneath the Christmas tree
    we just want him/her for our own

    and this is too sad

    adriana veloso

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  • Dolan Doran (1/2/2009 7:24:00 PM)

    interesting..never thought of Christmas that way....it's creative...lovely.

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  • Moushumi moushumi (12/31/2008 8:23:00 AM)

    It should reach to one of 500 poems. This style is innovative.
    Happy New year.

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  • Sierra Love (12/29/2008 4:54:00 PM)

    Wow this poem was really beautiful....you have such a creative way of looking at Christmas....never though of it that way. Great job, I really love it.

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  • Mimi Fakhira (12/29/2008 4:28:00 AM)

    Creative poem... a successful write. I totally love it! Have a great New Year!

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  • Egi David Perdana (12/27/2008 10:40:00 PM)

    happy christmas my pal

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  • Little Hatila ;) (12/26/2008 10:42:00 PM)

    'Merry Christmas to you
    Without you, I feel blue'
    very sad, but hope she will be there soon....10

    Hataw

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  • Subbaraman N V (12/24/2008 12:16:00 AM)

    I am there! Merry Christmas to you and the New Year too!

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  • Dr Kamran Haider (12/23/2008 10:51:00 AM)

    Bro, you are really master of words... Merry Christmas to you...
    God bless you

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  • Costa Anakiev (12/23/2008 6:51:00 AM)

    well done! it's nearly an acrostic. read my new 'Writing to Santa again'. merry x-mas to you.

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