Change Poem by Johannes Yeboah

Change

Rating: 4.7


Slowly the Sun bids farewell
Closes its eyes and zips its lips
Not to shine again as the day suddenly drifts
Only for the Moon to say, 'It's okay, you've done well'.

As a caterpillar nibbles and wriggles
On leaves: a villain, but quite feeble
A villain, so cunning and sly
Suddenly turns a magnificent butterfly

Sparkling rubies fetched on the Moon are mere stones on Earth
Alive, one minute; the next, encompassed by the climate of Death
Melodious today; guttural tomorrow
All makes the minstrel's song one filled with sorrow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crystal Ofori 17 April 2010

hmmmmmmmmmm......were u created by God? how come he endowed u with so much lyrics to make evry poem of urs so enchanting? this one in particular s a true masterpiece! ! keep the fire burning! !

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Kurt Behle 22 June 2009

Well Written Mister. Near to Great

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 April 2009

This is just wonderful. Because this poem is a perfect example of a poem where the title is critical to the writing itself. The title defines this poem completely. I don't believe I have ever seen a better example of it. GW62

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 April 2009

A beautiful panoramic poem with wonderful lively imagery. Keep up the good work, Johannes.......10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Maria Isabel Oropeza 14 April 2009

I liked this one. I liked the rhythm and the message. Great write! Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth

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