Castle In The Clouds Poem by little wolf Emerson Brayfield

Castle In The Clouds

Rating: 5.0


in the fog
in the fog
what do i see
i see the tree lines
but to me i see a castle in the clouds
the way it looks to me is the fog in hiding the castle
that castle is in the clouds where you can see a new world
the world where everything is calm and no war is going on
you hear the sweet tweet of birds in the early spring
you hear the trickle of the stream
you see all green around you
this is the castle in the clouds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2016

the way it looks to me is the fog in hiding the castle that castle is in the clouds where you can see a new world the world where everything is calm and no war is going on you hear the sweet tweet of birds in the early spring.....great imagination of a castle of hope in the skies up above. where there is no war or calamities. where there is only peace......... very fine thought and this is a poem of hope. thank you dear poet. God bless you. tony

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little wolf Emerson Brayfield

little wolf Emerson Brayfield

Rochester New York
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