Carving The Heart Revised Poem by Aldo Kraas

Carving The Heart Revised



There is an sculptor that is carving my heart
By using the carving tools
It is looking very good, as far as hearts go.
The design that he carved in my heart is a house with grass, a tree and
A girl taking her dog for a walk in the backyard
Under a blue sky.
Also in the sky is writen, 'Peace be with you'
By seeing the drawings
I have the feeling that
He wants to say that
All the things that he sculpted inside
Are very important in life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 14 July 2014

What a wonderful tale thismpkem conveys. Great imagery you've created to make this such an enchanting poem!

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* Sunprincess * 09 July 2014

.........peace be with you....truly some things are very important...love the way the sculpture is carving the heart....so beautiful is this poem....

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Aldo Kraas

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Sao Paulo Brazil
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