Car Poem by David Harris

Car

Rating: 4.1


Four wheels to take you anywhere.
Upon it you bestow loving care.
But woe be tide,
if anything goes wrong.
Its grace falls foul,
and you sing another song.
Just like a woman,
I’ve often heard this said.
For on frosty nights,
you’ve got to wrap it up warm for bed.

14 Nov 1978

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
JoAnn McGrath 19 May 2007

check the dip stick and change the oil...lube her up....or she may foil....oh sorry I am talking about the car here; O)

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Jim Foulk 16 April 2007

a great write david as always, i really liked this one gave it a ten.

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Duncan Wyllie 11 March 2007

Look after them both with tender care, for who knows what the winter may bare This is a great piece Thankyou for sharing your tallent Love duncan X

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 March 2007

cars and woman need a lot of care and love... and a big tool now and again... David 10

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