Car Park Poem by Floyd Crenshaw

Car Park

Rating: 4.0


sitting in a car at a park
a comfortable seat for
a comfortable scene.

a bubbled filter of
a world too hard to
(mis) understand.

i hear life is what you make of it.

life is a mix of
fate and perseverance.

fate brings opportunity
and
perseverance ensures it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 29 August 2008

nicely worked with ease and grandeur. best care ~ ~

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David Desantis 07 April 2008

This is a really good one man. The last 4 lines are very powerful.

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