Candlelight Ethics Poem by Patrick Czyz

Candlelight Ethics



You are surrounded by darkness.
And encompassed by loneliness.
Your weary wax is well-nigh spent.
You are hopeless and tormented.

The light flickered.
'I burn.' said the orange tongue.
'I go.' echoed the smoke.

Then the smoke softly wafts into the void.
But not before the candle gave it its all.

Friday, May 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: courage
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem about not giving up. Like a candle, good ethics mean going to the end without giving in. All or nothing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 30 May 2014

Ah! Nicely done. As one who lights candles nightly, I can honestly say that now when I stare into that flame I shall always remember this poem!

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