~ Can U~ Poem by Soulful One

~ Can U~



Can U
make me want it
as much as
U want to
give it to me?

Can the wicked places
in my psyche and soul
speak loud enuf
to that place
in U
the craves
what is almost
too tempting to resist?

All the naughty ways
U want to
punishment me
for the audacity to
not only wake the beast
but taunt and tease it
with unrepentant
daring
chasing after
the pleasure of riding
that hot thin line of
fire that is the razor’s edge
of pain
can u tame the wildness in me
that woke the beast
in U?

Can imaginings of
the sight of me
marked and flushed
in submission
the sound of me
entering bliss on
the kat tails of pain
the feel of my skin
slick with sweat and desire
the scent of me
of U
rich earthy heady
hanging heavily in the air
like blood in the water
as the predator in U
rises to the challenge
and stalks my desire, ur prey
the taste of my flesh
between ur teeth
on ur tongue
imprinting the taste of
my pain
consumed with pleasure
can it tempt U enuf?

Can that place in U
that my desire speaks to
not only speak back
but take what U want
while making me
want to
give up and
give in
surrendering to
the promise of
a near irresistible passion
that is as commanding
as it is demanding
seeking to sculpt
my desire
according to Ur will
paint need
all over my flesh
and bring our satisfaction
to light
then extinguish
the inferno that rages
in our blood
calming Ur beast
taming my wildness
and leave both of us
more than satisfied
yet still wanting more

Can U?

06152010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyelizabeth Unknown 31 July 2010

wow! eye read this 5 times before eye could even close my mouth - so intense - eye hope that person knows how lucky they are... wow - igniting a wild fire. burning deep- saturated in mmmm....

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