Can'T You See? (Poem From Mad Woman) Poem by Luwi Habte

Can'T You See? (Poem From Mad Woman)

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For all the fight we had
For all the lies disturbs my mind
For all the scarifies I did
For all the problems I lead
Can’t you see why I was hurting?
Can’t you understand why I am paining?

Why don’t you take good care of me?
Don’t you feel sad when I cried especially?
So why do I got hurted when I saw you are mad
Then I punished my self and beg for God?

Can’t you recognize what I am doing secretly?
To spent more time with you, coming to you early
What a blind are you? Or you are wishing for excess supply
The only thing left is losing my life, just to die

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 20 May 2009

You know this reminds me of..'there is none so blind than those who refuse to see.' Sometimes letting go is the answer to the beginning of peace.

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Saadat Tahir 18 May 2009

hi luwi nice lines deeply felt keep penning cheers

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Tou Yang 17 May 2009

OMG another poem that explains how i feel for that special someone... the greatest poems comes from the heart! ! !

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Chad Foster 17 May 2009

oh my, i can totally relate to this poem. it really takes me back to that fragile state of mind that one can be thrown into after a breakup or whatnot. really really well written

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