Can'T Get You Off My Mind Poem by Kathryn Miller

Can'T Get You Off My Mind

Rating: 4.0


I’m here in a place,
Where playing in the sand is the thing to do,
But instead I want to be with you,

I’m here in this place,
Where gazing into the water is what’s right,
But instead I want to gaze at you,

I’m here in the same place,
Where watching fireworks if fun to do,
But instead I want to watch you,

Because this place I’m in is lonely,
Without you,
My only haven is sleep,
For I dream of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 05 December 2006

Really good write, Kathryn... wonderful expression and nicely composed. Well done! Brian

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Victor Ekpo 14 July 2006

The negative positive of falling in love. This is something I try to run away from. Too much of a battle.

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