Call Me Crazy Poem by Lucky You

Call Me Crazy

Rating: 5.0


Call me crazy,
But I’m beginning to think that maybe,
Maybe she was right.
Perhaps it’s time for you to take flight,
Leave me sitting here, cursed,
So you can be with the friend who comes first.
I defended you, said you were a friend,
But I think it’s time for those words to come to an end.
I once heard: “Love many, trust few”
I thought I trusted you, but now I see that this friendship isn’t true.
I waved to you and said “Hi, ”
Now I’m waving, but this time saying “Bye.”
Soon, I’ll cry and make a big deal,
I’ll cry, but I’ll keep this promise sealed.
Just like Taylor said, “I can’t breath without you,
But I have too.”
It’s beginning to get cold
It feels like, to you, my heart’s been sold.
I go sit on the cold ground out side,
And abide for you to choose your side.
Have you ever thought that maybe, your wrong, not me?
Perhaps that’s the key.
Now you can say you’re sorry all you want,
But know she was right again, you’re not.
You’re not Sorry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

A fine write. I like it. Bien!

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Leave me sitting here, cursed, So you can be with the friend who comes first. I defended you, said you were a friend, But I think it’s time for those words to come to an end. I once heard: “Love many, trust few”... it is life to feel sweet oe bitterness.. what a composition...10 read mine.. i miss.. miss i miss u.. Marry to marry

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Liyo Denorte 01 June 2010

i like ur style, it's quite fresh and conversational.. although its quite dark in content but i love how it moves your reader with your angst ridden message. i must say it's interesting

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