Bye Sun Poem by Megan Collins

Bye Sun

Rating: 5.0


You slide open your window gently, peering out into the beautiful leaving day. You step onto the sparkling black shingles of the roof. As you walk slowly across the roof you kneel to your knees. The pale blue clouds are surrounding you, every inch of your body taken over by there glow. Turning your head to the left, and slowly to the right you notice the sun sinking below the pink- blue clouds. The trees are whispering colorful secrets, they rage perfectly through your hair; you feel free. The sky seems to paint its own amazing colors, the orange bleeding into the blue. Embracing the sky, the colors bundle together to form a soft rainbow. Now, the gray seems to come in ghostly and take over, it time to say “goodbye” to the sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brennah Bailey 23 April 2009

This poem is really pretty! The imagery is truly amazing. Good Job!

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Debra Kemper 21 April 2009

There you go! Lots of imagery in prose poems - in fact, an overload of images. Much better!

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