Butterfly: Fortune Hunter Poem by kafil uddin raihan.

Butterfly: Fortune Hunter

Rating: 4.5


The little wings,
Bearing the colors,
Moving around the flower,
Charming her,
Kissing the petals,
Taking all the honeys,
Again forget her,
Leave her alone,
Take shelter of another,
Again making love,
The consequences are same,
May be he is the beauty,
But he is the fortune hunter,
The little butterfly...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

'But he is the fortune hunter, The little butterfly...' Yes, fortune hunter, truly expressed.10+++

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Obinna Eruchie 30 June 2009

The butterfly seeks the flower's love, which is the fortune he hunts. Beautiful piece.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 July 2009

WOW! symbolic the little butterfly fortune hunter! ! 10+

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Marieta Maglas 03 July 2009

I love this visual metaphor: ''The little wings, Bearing the colors, Moving around the flower, Charming her, '' imagine a surrealist picture with butterflies and flowers...what can be most beautiful...10+

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Brian Jani 07 June 2014

Kafil this is good poetry

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Shirley Woods 29 July 2009

Really nice descriptions and an unusual slant - really good!

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The little wings, Bearing the colors, Moving around the flower, Charming her, it is after butterflies and with colourful apperance attract us reminding of lovely nature....10 read mine...butterflies around....colour

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Saadat Tahir 06 July 2009

nice little poem with a clear message.... yes all butterflies are not as harmless as one might believe chrming similtude cheers

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Carol Gall 04 July 2009

a beautiful poem good and interesting

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