Burning Off Poem by Dorothea Mackellar

Burning Off

Rating: 2.8


They're burning off at the Rampadells,
The tawny flames uprise,
With greedy licking around the trees;
The fierce breath sears our eyes.

From cores already grown furnace-hot -
The logs are well alight!
We fling more wood where the flameless heart
Is throbbing red and white.

The fire bites deep in that beating heart,
The creamy smoke-wreaths ooze
From cracks and knot-holes along the trunk
To melt in greys and blues.

The young horned moon has gone from the sky,
And night has settled down;
A red glare shows from the Rampadells,
Grim as a burning town.

Full seven fathoms above the rest
A tree stands, great and old,
A red-hot column whence fly the sparks,
One ceaseless shower of gold.

All hail the king of the fire before
He sway and crack and crash
To earth - for surely tomorrow's sun
Will see him white fine ash.

The king in his robe of falling stars,
No trace shall leave behind,
And where he stood with his silent court,
The wheat shall bow to the wind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 29 July 2020

The fire bites deep in that beating heart, The creamy smoke-wreaths ooze From cracks and knot-holes along the trunk To melt in greys and blues. The young horned moon.. very fine expressions. tony

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Richard Davis 12 March 2022

Great comment Antony! We are doing a survey about this poem. Could you please explain what you think this poem is about and how you think these expressions created imagery in your mind. Much appreciated!

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Richard Davis 12 March 2022

Great comment Antony! I'm doing a survey about this poem. Can you tell me what you think this poem is about and how these expressions created imagery in your head.

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