Broken Hearted Poem by London Love Poems

Broken Hearted



Sitting by the waters edge
I now stare at a reflection
of a broken man.

A heart forever filled
with my love for you.

I cry lonesome tears
with a mind battered
and bruised by losing you.

The sounds of my grief
echoes through my heart
as I try so desperately
to step away from the past.

But the songs of nature
will always remind me
of the love I thought
would always last.

Closing my eyes
I cry inside, as my heart
silently dies.

Every day has become
so hard to bare, as I
search inside
for a reason to smile.

Only yesterday, it feels
that I lost you.
As this pain still feels
the same.

Crying into my broken reflection
I hear my heart call out your name.





© Jon.London 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 July 2009

A truly broken hearted poem, Jon. A deep seeded melancholy has been out poured.........10/10.

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Carl Harris 22 July 2009

Boy, I know this feeling all to well, Jon, and have been there myself more times than I care to mention. This melancholy poem is tremendously well written and expressed. It is a very moving write and one which nearly all of us can relate to very well, having had similar experiences in life and love ourselves. Carl.

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Carol Gall 22 July 2009

extremely beautifully written jon 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

very touchy reflection my friend Jon! I would say its an amazing song of heart! 10+

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Deborah Cromer 25 July 2009

Dang! Your poor heart silently dying. You did some sad, painful writing. Dude! Do you know how clearly you captured pain and hurt? I want to say very nice, but it's full of pain and how nice is that? I'll just say very well written. You've organized this in a very relatable way. Deborah Cromer

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Ency Bearis 23 July 2009

well described emotion.....10

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Lynda Robson 23 July 2009

You have described th epain of losing someone so well here Jon, Crying in my cuppa, 10 Lynda xx

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Broken Heart 23 July 2009

nycc poem! ! gr8! ! ..

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Lady Grace 22 July 2009

words when emotionally written makes up a good poem, ..when a poem comes from heart and brain, absolutely the result is a perfect poem like this poem of urs my dear jon..this is nicely done..i go with carl harris, i will use the word 'tremendously written'...

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