Broken Heart Poem by yashika R

Broken Heart

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i just love the illusion when i close my eyes
and the felling is nice
but the reality pricks my conscience when my eyes are open
and i am just blank with my pen
but i am happy that i have not fallen into the pit
and i also feel sad a little bit
because i miss the mirage feeling a lot
but anyways i am going to put a stop with a dot
i came to know that my heart always lies
my memory ties
now the true
color of you is in front of me
i will lock you with my brain key
i never want to see you again in my life
because your like knife
no one can betray my feelings
even though we had many dealings
anyways i don't regret for it
and i will always keep my mind fit
i will never get influenced by you at any time
because your bitter like lime
i just love to be myself

Thursday, April 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 May 2016

now the true color of you is in front of me i will lock you with my brain key i never want to see you again in my life because your like knife........no one can betray my feelings.. i am totally determined. i will be myself. a very nice poem of determination and self will in a positive way. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Yashika Frin 26 May 2016

thanks a lot dr.tony for your encouraging comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2015

Closing eyes and loving the illusion both make wonderful imagery here in this poem really. Wonderful sharing.

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Yashika Frin 27 April 2015

thank you so much

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Mj Lemon 09 April 2015

i will never get influenced by you at any time because your bitter like lime i just love to be myself...A great statement of independence in all and every form. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 09 April 2015

Always be yourself, Yashika. And keep writing poetry.

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