Broken Heart Poem by Emily price

Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


i meet him eye to eye
will he ever see me for who i am
or just past right on by
then he goes with them
and leaves me behind
i fill torn apart
and out of my mind
that's when he took my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 08 November 2009

Emily, this a poem well crafted and full of feelings, a broken heart is hard to heal right away, but only time will do, hoping you read my poem titled 'IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS' and you can see clearly I have been there, too, you got my vote 10+++, keep it up....

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