Blue Pain Poem by Sandra Feldman

Blue Pain

Rating: 5.0


The Atmosphere is clear,
The Sky, an intense blue
One can't deny,
I think of you
So far, Away
And I,
Alone, remember
Happy days
So swiftly gone away
So Darkened by,
Time's choking hand
Never returning
What is past and gone
And I,
Try not to cry
Remembering,
The smiles, the love
That Time has blown away
In the cruelest,
Most devastating way.

Those deep blue, happy skies
Sad blue and cold today
Only memories remain,
Empty days
And darker nights
Silently transmitting,
Deep blue pain,
The nothingness,
I cannot fight.

Saturday, October 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,painful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Marandi 19 October 2019

" Time's choking hand never returning what is past and gone" . " Empty days and darker nights silently transmitting deep blue pain" . Poignant poem. Sad but true. Great depiction of sadness and hopelessness. As I believe, life is cruel and time is no better than that.

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Cynthia Deon 18 October 2019

What a deep felt and sincere write. Very beautifully captured.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 October 2019

Heartaches will never last, dear Ma’am Sandra.......10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 October 2019

A vivid depiction of loneliness. Poignant yet so beautiful poem. Each and every marvelous line touches the heart. I hope and pray, one day, you will find happiness in those deep blue and happy skies. Beautifully written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2019

Sky looks very blue and the atmosphere is clear. Smile of love is noticed in sky. One should remain happy and he should not cry. This poem is wonderfully penned.10

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