Birthday Party Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India

Birthday Party

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But no friends,
You can't call
Any one your friend.
Also see
Each neighbour is envious.

You are to see
Your own face
In your own mirror.
Also you can say
How bare
How uncomfortable you are.

Since each one is preoccupied
With his and her own self.
Here see
Nothing is tasty.

Door is opened
But see
No one is there to enter.

Monday, November 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sachidananda Panda 23 November 2020

You are to see Your own face In your own mirror. Also you can say How bare How uncomfortable you are. introspection and self analysis two vital elements...... liked the idea.. Thanks

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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 November 2020

Sir my humble suggestion would be for you to add a line...At your borthday party... after every verse or at the end of the poem. Sorry if i spoiled your birthday poem (party)

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Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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