Birth Day Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Birth Day

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as i remember my day
with the angel by the side
embracing the time unstocked
as resourced from the womb

with the verses by the heart well-define
as i share those when mutterings
yet the whispers of solemn river
when curved over cravings undiscovered

yet sweet words in mute undertones
crystals of the glass dazzling
quite breakable as nobody knows
even may cruise and handle with care

still it ripples from the skin
from the temple’s stone
the birds chirrups over the tree
nest when hanging by hinges of the breeze

my moments of the time peeling off
ravings when melting slowly by the hours
i look back as the leaf falling apart
from its core i look forward with anger.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Monica Engeler 06 April 2008

Interesting and yet sad. Love your wording. Nice poem.

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Abha Sharma 27 March 2008

your beautifully weave nature to make your stance clear crystals of the glass dazzling quite breakable as nobody knows .....................all such imagery actually comes before my eyes....

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Thad Wilk 14 March 2008

A sad poem yet captivating, great insight here! Thanks for sharing ! ! *10*! ! Best Regards, Friend Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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