Between Us Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Between Us

Rating: 3.0


The distance between you and me
As we swim in the lake
Is only our breath.
The distance between you and the sun
Is the whole sky.
The distance between me and the setting sun
Is only my outstretched arms.
See! I touch fingers of gold,
And you braid it into my blazing hair
As you comb your fingers through it.
The distance between the setting sun and us
Is only our skin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 August 2018

The distance between me and the setting sun Is only my outstretched arms. See! I touch fingers of gold, And you braid it into my blazing hair. beautiful.. so much of love and fineness in your words.. tha nku dear poetess. tony

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Romeo Della Valle 23 July 2011

Wow! Lillian! What a romantic and heart touching poem that really left me speechless! I really love it! Amazingly it moved me! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Edmund Calleja 13 December 2010

Very touching poem. I love all amourous poems! . I rejoice that I found your corner of poems. Edmund

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 January 2010

Finest imageries and enjoyed to the lees… Thanks for sharing… Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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