Better Then Nothing, I Think Not Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Better Then Nothing, I Think Not

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better then nothing, is not enough,
i wont it all, the first part, the 2nd
part, and the end part,
better then nothing, is not enough,
i wont it all, a brand new language,
a brand new kiss, and love thats fits
like a key into a lock,
and when were done, we can feed the
birds, smell the flowers, and draw
pictures on the clouds.
better then nothing, i think not......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 October 2006

'PICTURES OIN THE CLOUDS'....NOW, TO COIN A CRITIQUE PHRASE FROM A FELLOW POET & FRIND IN TRUE....'a great line'! ''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Patricia Gale 07 October 2006

Never settle for less, and so you have stated... well done! ! !

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