kassem oude

Gold Star - 15,023 Points (1955 / Lebanon)

Best Day - Poem by kassem oude

On cliff wolf saw the goat
He shouted out of his throat
'Would ask you something dear
Which is the best day in year'

'When I don't your voice hear
Nor when your shape far appear
Leave me alone live in peace
I cannot endure your caprice.

Monday 9 June 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: Happiness

Comments about Best Day by kassem oude

  • Rookie - 192 Points Alaa Elgadi (6/7/2015 6:38:00 PM)

    Such a dramatic poem.. It is an enthralling verse... Well- preserved rhyme with a metaphysical dialogue between a murderer and a victim.... Well done Poet Kaseem Oude... (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/9/2014 8:41:00 AM)

    Wow im impressed by yor wonderful rhymin skill. I also liked yor jinn poem so much.
    Pls coment my latest poem too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 70,570 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/9/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    good writing, thanks, I like it.
    please read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, June 9, 2014

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