Becoming One Poem by Suzanne Hayasaki

Becoming One

Rating: 4.5


I weave you into my poetry.
Your thoughts entwine with mine
Creating a tapestry of old ideas
Presented in the freshness of new love.

You are there in the lines
Even when you cannot see it.
You are the fire that may dance
Or ebb away to embers in my mind's eye.

You remain in my art
Whether I am content or irate,
Confused or disillusioned,
Elated or contemplating walking away.

I always stay.
You never change.
It may be your constancy
That allows me to range free
In the wilderness of our garden.

Wednesday, July 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Enjoyed this much, young lady...Your structural movement is virtually flawless compliments of crisp, tight linage that wraps from one line to the next mellifluously...Stellar crafting ~FjR~

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Suzanne Hayasaki 22 July 2015

Thank you very much for this wonderful compliment!

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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