Beauty Poem by Vanessa Kingsley

Beauty

Rating: 5.0


The world of beauty, full, of hatred, evil, and lust. For beauty will consume all, that dare to use her dust. She is the talk of the town and wanted by all, though this thing called beauty, wants to kill us all. She will manipulate and twist, anything she can, so hurry, dear friend, hurry. Come and take my hand. Or has she gotten you? This foul and wonderful beast, this beauty that promises everything, but can not give a thing. To those that are beauty, they will twist your mind. Though society has a way of beauty and is different, so beauty can not take, that it does not have for we all have opinions that beauty can not grasp, so be careful what you say, for beauty may hear, and take you away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 19 June 2009

great concept. top to bottom a great piece...i love the way it starts of and ends.. keep up the great work

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Vinod Kumar 11 April 2009

Nice invention, actually the beauty comes from the mind and feel, not the visible and view, beautiful poem,10+

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 March 2009

A paradoxical write on beauty. Other than some technical glitches it is wonderful. Best Wishes Naseer

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Catrina Heart 18 March 2009

interesting piece...mystic and dark though need a few editing of cutting of verses....Thanks! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 March 2009

I must say that I do not contemplate this dark side of beauty that you describe so well in this piece. It is not that I don't see it, it is that I don't study on it. Beauty is something that I see as present, but I do not take note of its effects on people and society too much. For me, I believe that beauty is a zero sum. It destroys as much as it claims. You seem to be wary of it. I am less curious about it, because I do not see it hiding. It is always there to be seen. GW62

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Vanessa Kingsley

Vanessa Kingsley

Colorado Springs, Colorado
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