Basic Words Foretold Poem by Brandon Bizon

Basic Words Foretold

Rating: 5.0


Broken down with broken dreams
Nothing lasts at the seems
Tainted love from the start
You can’t feel the beat of my heart
A roar above, out of sight
The sky turns dark, it’s not night
Before I go its time to say
What a wonderful way
To go down in flames
You can’t chase your shadow all your life
Wondering what was said about the after life
I move on now down this road
No stops, no turns just a code
911 was foretold
One last breath, one last look
You can’t forget what you took
Basic words written on the walls
Torn apart
No more words
Now we know, it was a secret
Unveiled at last by a ghost
Came back down to seek revenge
Got em back, now they’re dead
Never wanna be here again
And I don’t remember why I came

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you have some potential in you.................go with it........ i pray better days come.

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Broken down with broken dreams Nothing lasts at the seems Tainted love from the start You can’t feel the beat of my heart...... very good write dear.. but deams not come true... it is reflection ofur true llove.... keep it up.. read mine all dreams not come true, , , , mary to marry and how are u?

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Nooruddeen Mm 30 June 2009

Dear Brandon You have done a good job, Nice writing Keep writing Rgds Noor

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