Bareback Poem by Rehan Hyder

Bareback

Rating: 4.0


In panties and T
Brushing teeth
Your wet feet
Flooded me with
desire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Smith 16 February 2008

liked this, says much in few words smiffy

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Christine Austin Cole 05 July 2008

I've been reading you again this morning, Rehan. I am continually amazed at your ability to be succinct and perpetual at the same time. This piece is a extraordinary example of the same - it is the crispness of a single, precise instant, but too this broad, dreamy brush stroke of time. You give us the moment - and with it, the images that came before and the vision of what is to follow. Ah, what magic exists in these thirteen words! Beautiful, poet. Christine

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Karen Delta 28 April 2008

amazing how a few lines can stir so many feelings! hugs n more hugs!

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David Desantis 25 April 2008

awesome! I know the feeling, nothing more beautiful then the morning after when your lover strolls around in her underwear. Great one

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Waqas Naeem 08 March 2008

beautiful and romantic...i am simply in love with the subtlety of this verse! great job...

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Don Mcwilliams 21 February 2008

Rehan, A great deal is conveyed in these few words. Evocative of tremendous and personal visual images. Wonderfully written, thanks. Regards, Don

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