In panties and T
Brushing teeth
Your wet feet
Flooded me with
desire
I've been reading you again this morning, Rehan. I am continually amazed at your ability to be succinct and perpetual at the same time. This piece is a extraordinary example of the same - it is the crispness of a single, precise instant, but too this broad, dreamy brush stroke of time. You give us the moment - and with it, the images that came before and the vision of what is to follow. Ah, what magic exists in these thirteen words! Beautiful, poet. Christine
amazing how a few lines can stir so many feelings! hugs n more hugs!
awesome! I know the feeling, nothing more beautiful then the morning after when your lover strolls around in her underwear. Great one
beautiful and romantic...i am simply in love with the subtlety of this verse! great job...
Rehan, A great deal is conveyed in these few words. Evocative of tremendous and personal visual images. Wonderfully written, thanks. Regards, Don
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
liked this, says much in few words smiffy