Atlas Poem by Sean Foxx

Sean Foxx

Sean Foxx

Midwest region of the United States of America

Atlas



Sweat
Dripping
Breath heaving
Muscles aching
My will is shaking
My mind concentrating
Power erupting
Body bracing
Weight straining
Yelling
Lift

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Goldy Locks 27 August 2008

Strong format. Use the words to their fullest effect. keep on, sjg

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Sean Foxx

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Midwest region of the United States of America
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