At The Carnival Poem by Yana Thompson

At The Carnival

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As I hear the beating of the drums
my hips begin to twitch.

My heart thumps in tune to the beating,
the beating of the never ending drums.

As I close my eyes,
I begin to sway from side to side.

Still swaying to the beat I fling out my arms,
everything that is in me is burning to dance.

I give in to these bohemic urges,
and my body begins a sensual dance that I dont know.

My skirt billows and furls in a myrad of color,
as my feet move faster and my jumps are higher.

I am in exctasy,
this is who I am and this is who I was born to be.

All of the sudden the music stops,
I open my eyes to look around and I wish that I could be swallowed
up by the ground.

People are looking at me with astonishment in their gaze,
and I come to from that mysteriouse haze.

I walk away with my head held high,
and smile sweetly at the passer bye.

I think of my dance,
going over it with a critical eye.

Then I smile to myself,
there is no reason to be ashamed or feel like I have to hide.

My skin glistening,
the sweat of my dance is like a badge of pride.

I look at the bright colors around me,
and I goad myself into just maybe one... or two more carnival rides.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K. V. Venkataramana 04 May 2008

Excellent poem, Yana. I would like to read more of your poems!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 April 2008

an enchanting happiest moment of ones life...........the memories lingered eternally..........magnificent write yana...........keep up

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Don Mcwilliams 20 March 2008

Excellent read, Yana. Thanks. Don

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Yana Thompson

Yana Thompson

Baltimore city, Maryland
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