At The Beginning......... Poem by Antonio Liao

At The Beginning.........

Rating: 4.5


created in a simple form with a simple purpose
to enjoy what is given and live in a simple ways
where each gift is given according to each one
needs

leaves, creator to walk in the paradise, where
everything is almost heaven to take, worries,
anxiety, pain, and suffering is not a experienced
to remember

gives all of what is life in the heaven's park, a will
that is freely given, the will to pro-creates, to
judge, to live and the authority to save all of what
is living

now is to die of what makes every living live a
time to go and see, believe, and forward, every
precious moment to feel the special time, the
remembrance of every start

a simple beginning, where everybody leaves every
soul to a simple return....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 13 February 2009

can't find words to fit the admiration for this poem, , , it is very beautiful... naizz

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Ric Bastasa 09 February 2009

how beautifully written indeed.. i can't believe myself reading and rereading the lines... one hundred points...

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

great message to impart...beautiful views you have shared...10+

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