As When Within Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As When Within

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Until that day of reminiscence
as you are ever me within
Neither beyond nor yet apart
Still within blotted blue ravine
Just as the smokes by the fire

Thing changes even if from beyond
as the tree by the seeds from within
Yet as deep as clouds to the rain
Night when descends to the day
Breeze whispers to the bay within

Love once bloomed yet within
Never yet lost even by the storm of rage
Even if distanced being alone or agile
As no dimension breaks yet it apart

As the beyond becomes within
Like smacking of fire from the rock
Time yet turns the minutes to the years
As the love within is never flung far beyond

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Minnu Serah 01 March 2008

a beautiful piece....

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Jing Jing 27 February 2008

so beautiful work, rocking the ages.....................

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Thad Wilk 19 February 2008

A never ending love captured beautifully D.R. Kar! Thank you for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best Regards : Friend Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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