As Love When Inkling Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As Love When Inkling

Rating: 5.0


Boat when drifting
amidst the oceanic blue
woods yet float above
nearer and nearer by the ripples
as I embrace the sands of sorrow

passion when flows intense
blood seems to glows by the red
across the heart through the vein
the sun yet warms the earth
cloud when addicted by rain

breaths when blows baited
as love inkling cuddles
summer breeze as seeping
through the attic window
as I remember the frolic art of love inkling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emancipation Planz 23 February 2008

This ink-ling is tattooed artistically over the natural, the physical... a worthy landscape of loving effects / affects! ! !

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Thad Wilk 23 February 2008

Nice write Dr Kar! Always great to remember the whispers of love! *10*! ! Best regards Friend Thad

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Meggie Gultiano 24 February 2008

I love the second stanza, Dr, very beautifully written, the whole piece..It shows your being a very romantic person and lovable, too

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Sandra Fowler 29 February 2008

What a beautiful, eloquent write! I love what you have seen from your attic window on the world. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 27 February 2008

Subhendu this is another wonderful heart filled piece that touches the emotions and the senses due to your picturesque imagery! I so Love this one my friend. You have such a talent for expressing yourself well! The attic window provided such a Great picture that I felt I was standing in one looking out and feeling the breeze blowing back in at me... Thank you so much for sharing... I wish you all that is Good, Shelley

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Jing Jing 27 February 2008

Dr. very beautiful and meaningful write................

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CU2urDream Lost 24 February 2008

how i do love your work Dr. I now i know why Mary just admire your work, and you are diff. cause you truly write it from your feelings.

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Tsira Goge 24 February 2008

Hello subhendu, Very touchingly, it is huge feeling in everyone to a stanza and it between too.... 10.... Tsira

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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