As I Close My Eyes Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As I Close My Eyes

Rating: 4.9


as I close my eyes
as when retired by remorse
into the deep darkness
all the gestured images
of my unbecoming gods rill on
and you sneak to me obsessively

yet all flicker beyond
as when lapped by your thrills
resourced as when cohered
as you embrace the grace
here and there or elsewhere
on the milieu of earthly sojourn

the storm when claps my dream
down to the reeks by the dusts
as I simply open the eyes
I do feel the pain by the sorrow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Peaces 10 February 2008

A beautiful capturing intense feeling thankyou for sharing that moment Chris 10

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Meggie Gultiano 10 February 2008

so lovingly said, well penned, and loving gentle flow of words! as if i was there..oh, this is nice piece.Thanks for sharing this one, Dr. Love, Meggie

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Thad Wilk 10 February 2008

A beautiful and poignant poem Dr. Kar! ! Thank you for sharing! ! ! *10*! ! ! Best wishes Friend Thad

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good bye 11 February 2008

Beautiful write Dr. I truly enjoy reading it..nice verse..

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Marvin Brato 12 February 2008

Filled with passion and realities that made our living on this world! Great verse! Perfect 10.

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Eithne Queen of Celts 04 March 2008

very sad and beautiful.A very delicate form of melancholy.

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Meggie Gultiano 24 February 2008

remarkably a very wonderful and great piece you have here, Dr. This is also a very deep one. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Love, Meggie

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CU2urDream Lost 24 February 2008

Dr. very beautiful and loved so much your way of write.............

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Maxislam Beauty 23 February 2008

Lovely work, it is so deep and very unique style of writing.

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Jing Jing 23 February 2008

well, penned thank you for sharing

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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