Argentine Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Argentine

Rating: 5.0


In the horizon
A secret argentine moon
Peeps from behind clouds
Albeit most innocently
Girl on her first day to school

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My First Tanka
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 05 March 2022

Brilliant imagery. Nicely thought tanka.5****

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Beautiful.Like it.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Happy to hear that you liked the poem. Thank you, Sir

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Thank you for the appreciation, dear poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

A nice maiden Tanka.....appreciated it dear sir. Thanks for sharing this beautiful argentine moon poem with us.5 stars.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

I am not very sure this poem qualifies for a tanka, Dilipji. If you think yes, I am happy. And thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Hope you enjoy the poem

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

This is my first attempt at the poem form, Tanka.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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