Archtypical Poem by John Kipling Lewis

I like this one and I can relate to the thought it provokes.

4. First of all, it's 'archetypical' - you spell it wrong twice and right once - surely this means at least one of the spellings in wrong. As for the poem itself, right now it's just an idea for a poem, which could work, but it's missing the poem aspects of it - imagery, details, concrete sensory content.

This one is okay and is a good use of words to describe feeling alone. I like this one, not because of the subject matter, but because of the way it is written.