Apricot Picnic Poem by Susan Lacovara

Apricot Picnic

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Black plums and painting pictures
Near a creek that carries a tune
And there we'd lay out
Two stripped souls
Against the summer's sad and said goodbye

I'd cut you apples
And watch as your mouth devoured my heart
Studying clouds smooching, overhead
They care not...
As we once did the same....

Apricot affection
For our played out picnic
....And then......
...............the rain........
.......................began...........
................................to fall.........

Thursday, August 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(08/27/15) For the one I hunger for. Life is no picnic....without your touch.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2015

Wonderful imagery. Excellent depiction with best collocation. Thanks for posating such intensive poem. ..... 10

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