An Unfinished Fiction Poem by Daniel Brick

An Unfinished Fiction

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Is the man alone the hero
of this story? Does he perhaps
double as the villain? It would
not be difficult for him to play
both roles. On the surface
both characters are elegant
in clothing and conversation, both
pay a generous tithe to Mother Church,
both promise a full accounting
to the Office of Taxation, both
alternately stand out in a crowd,
or sink into anonymity if required.
One says: "We are masters of disguise
and deceit." His voice is firm and
secure. The other cringes, and remains
silent. Which of these responses
marks the hero, which the villain?
There's a mystery here, can we solve it?
Or should we declare there is no mystery,
and all of us go home. I don't know.
Let me think this through. I'm certain
I am the hero, and you the villain. Or....

Wednesday, November 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fiction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 27 November 2019

Daniel, this may seem random, but what springs to mind is Jesus’ story of the two men who go up to the Temple to pray—the Pharisee and the tax collector, a sinner. Assuming you know it, I leave it at that. -Glen

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Richard Wlodarski 20 November 2019

Daniel, you are a hero in so many great ways! I have been both hero and villain. And not comfortable in either role.

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